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We went from best friends to not talking
in an instant.
That boy told me lies.
He told me what you were saying to everyone.
It wasn't true.
I tried to talk to you,
to understand what it was you had supposedly been saying,
but all I got was hatred.
The love between us was gone.
Best friends.
Not.
I don't understand how you could possibly be so mad at me,
for a simple question,
I wanted to understand,
so I asked,
the answer I got was goodbye.
I hate you.
Leave me alone.
Why?
Best friends?
No.
I thought I knew you,
the boy that I loved,
he's in there somewhere,
but not for me.
For someone else you deemed worthy.
Friendship means nothing.
I lost my best friend,
because of a misunderstanding,
because of a rumor.
Why? Because that boy lied.
The boy that told me all the things you told him,
or so he said.
But you didn't.
And now you hate me.
I'm sorry for trying to understand,
what was happening.
I could not comprehend what he was saying,
that my best friend was spreading such a thing,
like wildfire.
You didn't.
But he said you did.
And now my best friend refuses to look at me.
Because of that boy.
The one with the big mouth.
I hate him,
he tore us apart.
Me and my best friend?
No more.





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BrokenWingsofVanityAndWax said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 2:16 am
I enjoyed reading it. I'm seeming to notice that in your poems you are venting in some way wether good or bad. In this one bad. BUT it was very enjoyable. 
 
Reader101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 7:07 am
thank you! and yes i do a lot of writing when im sad or angry... usually my poems dont come out very happy....
 
ohheyyyelli said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 1:52 pm
It seems a little run-on-y. Like you were rambling, maybe? Venting? You can feel the emotion in it though, and it has good flow. I think with a little bit of tweaking, this would be really good[:
 
Reader101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 8:27 am
I dont really have a purpose with this one besides venting...
 
.Izzy. said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 1:08 pm
It flows well...a great free verse poem! I'm having a hard time finding the message though..
 
Mariam.JThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 9:06 am

I like the flow but I don't really get where you're going with this? :/

Is it about a person who ruined your relationship with this other boy?

 
Reader101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 8:42 am
yeah i guess... idk really where i was going... i was angry soi started writing... :/
 
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