Temptation

June 29, 2011
I'm tempted
tempted to
disobey your specific
orders
not because I want
to
but because I need
to
I've found something
worth
being caught
they won't come
out
of my head
I wish you would
understand
what this means
to me
I'm tempted





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Ha-5-rika said...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 10:51 am
I really love the way you break your lines. I like your writing.
 
musicispassion replied...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 2:21 pm
thanks people don't ususally like were i break them :P
 
Zildj This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 1:16 am
I love a poem that says what I've thought before
 
musicispassion replied...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 9:49 pm
thanks :P !
 
Tink1350 said...
Jul. 10, 2011 at 1:15 pm
this is really good. i love ur writing. 
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 10, 2011 at 1:27 pm
aaaawww thank you it means alot
 
Alon_Freevoice said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 10:27 pm
Same here. Making mistakes is inevitable. :(
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 10:39 pm
if i would of done what I wanted to i would have never seen the light of day again :P
 
qui133 replied...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 12:28 pm
i understand how that feels...
 
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