I Love Hugs

June 29, 2011
Hugs
a burst of
warmth
a easy way to
comfort
a simple
soothing
helping to solve
problems
they make the world
go round
so much happens
during a
hug





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PaRaNoRmAl627 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 10:54 am
this is cute :) the format is really different thoughh. i couldnt really find the rhythm, you know? but still, i liked the message, so good job :)
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 2:38 pm
thanks i know this isn't one of my strongest poems
 
PaRaNoRmAl627 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 3:03 pm
its okk, I've read other ones of yours that I really liked a lot. you have a loot of talent :)
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 5:05 pm
thanks happy to hear :P
 
CarrieAnn13 said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 10:06 pm
This is a really sweet, short poem.  I don't particularly like hugs, though.
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 10:11 pm
can i ask why? thanks by the way
 
CarrieAnn13 replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 10:27 pm
I don't like hugs because I don't really like being physicall close to people.  I like my personal space.  Besides, it's mostly guys wanting to hug me.
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 10:31 pm
o sorry and u must be pretty if all the guys want hugs luucky ur probably pretty
 
CarrieAnn13 replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 10:32 pm
No, I'm not pretty.  They're just pervs.
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 10:32 pm
i know what  mean but i bet your still pretty
 
CarrieAnn13 replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 10:33 pm
Aw, thanks.  Even if it's not true.
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 10:38 pm
did u read my poem mirrors?  think it might have rubbed off on u " I'm beautiful in my way cuz god makes no mistakes i'm on the right track baby i was born this way don't hide urself in regret just love ur self anf ur set " from the mother of monsters haha :P
 
CarrieAnn13 replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 10:39 pm
I read your poem 'Mirrors.'  Maybe it did rub off on me. ;)
 
Delictious said...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 10:18 pm
I love hugs too! Thanks for the cute poem, it's really nice(:
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 11:39 pm
thanks hugs make the world go round :P
 
JustAnotherOwl said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 11:21 am
Great! I love hugs! :)
 
Alon_Freevoice said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 10:26 pm
I love hugs. No, I need hugs! :)
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 10:40 pm
here's one  *hug* haha:P
 
Alon_Freevoice replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 11:01 pm
and another *hug* LOL
:D
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 11:42 pm
thanks much appreciated
 
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