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I Don't Know How You Feel, But You Know.

By , Walpole, MA
I know you know
I can tell.
The way our eyes meet,
How nothing else matters,
It’s there,
I doubt I can imagine something this strong.
You know & I know,
It’s in the way we watch each other,
The way we talk to only each other,
And the knowing looks we get from adults.
I swear you know,
You blow off others for me,
And there’s the way you hurt my heart,
The way I get nervous still,
I know you know.
But I’m too afraid to find out,
Because even if you know,
You might not return it at all.
That, I don’t know,
But I know you know …
Can you please know,
And please feel the same.



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live.laugh.write. said...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 9:44 pm:

I think this is a really nice piece of writing. You have a talent. This really explains how a lot of girls feel and I'm sure they love to read things like this, so they know they aren't alone. It's not fair that anyone has to feel this way.

Keep up the awesome writing!

 
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GangstaEyesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 8:26 pm:
I totally agree with OneInParticular1017 - :) I can relate as can every other girl. I really like this a lot; its not too long but it gets the point across. Check out my stuff if you get a second? Thanks and keep writing! :)
 
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OneInParticular1017 said...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 8:03 pm:
You summarize nicely how every girl feels sometime in her life. Great job.
 
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SaintAkz said...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 4:37 pm:

lol i know how this feels. lol search me an you'll see

 

 
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meiv244 said...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 4:22 pm:
I really love this poem! (:
 
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Gabiiiii This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 7:01 pm:

I seriously have this issue with a guy right now. Sorry you have to feel that way too.

I hope it works out for you, though.  :)

 
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Clarissa21 said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 4:39 pm:

Love this poem. Its such a beautiful poem!

Comment&Rate mine!(:

 
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