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Perambulating Love

June 28, 2011
By Writomania PLATINUM, New Delhi, Other
Writomania PLATINUM, New Delhi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"What really does not kill you, will only make you stronger"- Kanye West
"If there was no electricity, we would've had to watch the television by candle light"- Joe Jonas
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger


I can’t concentrate
This feeling is just so new
Because every time my mind wanders
Your image swims into view
Your shy smile
Your sideways glance
Your confident stride
Leave me in a trance
I’m helpless
I don’t know what to do
Forget about the stress
I don’t even know you
I think that I’m chasing
Some forlorn dream
In the middle of a fire blazing
Down a white-hot surging stream
Of some weird feelings
That have still got me
Confused
Befuddled
Bemused
Is this just some vague infatuation?
Or wait—
Do you feel the same transition?
Running circles in your heart too?
Are we on our way to perdition?
Or are our feelings really true?



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on Jul. 23 2011 at 7:37 am
Writomania PLATINUM, New Delhi, Other
22 articles 0 photos 119 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What really does not kill you, will only make you stronger"- Kanye West
"If there was no electricity, we would've had to watch the television by candle light"- Joe Jonas
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

Thanks. :)

DeeCaf said...
on Jul. 23 2011 at 4:56 am
DeeCaf, No Way, Other
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Favorite Quote:
That's the thing about cake, it demands to be eaten.

That's great! I love that you used all the big words right :) People generally don't :/ 

on Jul. 20 2011 at 7:41 am
Writomania PLATINUM, New Delhi, Other
22 articles 0 photos 119 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What really does not kill you, will only make you stronger"- Kanye West
"If there was no electricity, we would've had to watch the television by candle light"- Joe Jonas
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

Thanks. :)

on Jul. 19 2011 at 2:51 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

i do love the rhymeness, and i am also loving the last four lines. i do also the opening.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 3:59 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

You're welcome. :) 

on Jul. 8 2011 at 11:00 am
Writomania PLATINUM, New Delhi, Other
22 articles 0 photos 119 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What really does not kill you, will only make you stronger"- Kanye West
"If there was no electricity, we would've had to watch the television by candle light"- Joe Jonas
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

wow.. thats such a GREAT compliment.. i can barely disguise my happiness haha.

You really made by 9 o clock today.

Thanks so much!


Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 10:14 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

I can really relate to this poem!!

This reminds me of the first time I fell in love. Unfortunately, it was unrequited. :( 

GREAT POEM! ONE OF THE BEST I'VE EVER READ ON TEEN INK!! :) 



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