Choosing Titles

June 26, 2011
By LyricalBeauty GOLD, Fontana, California
LyricalBeauty GOLD, Fontana, California
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Favorite Quote:
" 'I am happy' that's just the saddest lie..."

"I think that all the silence is worse than all the violence. Fear is such a weak emotion, that's why I despise it..."


My heart's not a game.
It's not something you can play with, with no shame.
You can't say you like me one minute and change your mind the next,
The more you do so, the more I become vexed.
You love me;
Then you could care less.
You want me;
Now you're making me guess.
Why do you feel like you can play with my emotions?
Your mood swings are really starting to feel like an ocean.
One second they're calm; The next, they're not.
Let me know if I should move on; This is your last shot.
If you want me, say it now.
And if you don't, then take a bow.
You may move on with your life and so shall I,
Just let me know, should I prepare for 'goodbye'?
If not, then why are you playing around?
Your mood swings are overcoming me, I'm starting to drown.
Make up your mind! The clock is ticking.
You're deciding now. No more of your tricking.
The answer is a simple 'yes' or 'no'
Tell me now, shall I introduce you as my beau? Or as my foe?
Because you may no longer have the best of the two,
Deciding time is now, which title is right for you?


The author's comments:
Inspired by that boy that played with my heart for the longest time; he finally chose his title.

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on Jul. 24 2011 at 12:29 pm
Mz.Minny2011 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
My fav quote (4now)
When I met you my heart skipped a beat..... the sun became the moon & cold became heat.... Roses weren't red an violetes weren't blue.....And all because i fell IN LIKE WITH YOU <3

once again i luved ur poem.! i hate when boyz play with your heart until it rips in two.! u jus gave me inspirationg to write.!

 


Honey<3. said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 2:08 am
This poem is super gewd ! I love it. Great work! :D

bay_day said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 11:00 am
omfg, guys really DO need to learn how to choose their titles!!! >=I I freaking love this poem so much. I'm about to fwd it to every girl i know hahah. I wish guys could see how obnoxious it is to string a girl along. Its like: if you like me, then like me; if you dont, then dont act like you do! Amazing poem!!!!!

Mrs.Green said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 10:26 am
Mrs.Green, Rialto, California
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Favorite Quote:
"When the power of love conquers the love of power, the world will be at peace."

This is 1 of my faves by u btw !! :D

Mrs.Green said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 10:25 am
Mrs.Green, Rialto, California
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Favorite Quote:
"When the power of love conquers the love of power, the world will be at peace."

Damn wishy-washy boys >=\ Loved the straight forward msg of the poem. Great work !!

on Jul. 21 2011 at 10:03 am
Jonah Awesome, Fontana, California
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Wow :o You can really tell that this guy played with your emotions. If he made you feel like he love you one second, and the next like he didn't care, he obviously wasn't the right guy for you. Despite what some girls may think, there ARE a few good guy left =) I hope you find one that doesn't mess with you emotionally. I love the poem<3

on Jul. 21 2011 at 9:54 am
Abby Dugbartey, Fontana, California
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The picture that you chose kind of makes me wonder which title the boy (that this poem is directed at) chose :o

Loved the entire poem, every line was great nd there was no dull part :D you can really sense how annoyed the narrator is. Awesome job.!


Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jul. 17 2011 at 9:39 am
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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aww! this is sad. i've felt like this more than once. I love the ending!


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