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blue roses show my love

i give as a token

but look deeper inside

true its your favorite color

but its the one i hold

its the color of the rain

its the color of the sky

its the color of my heart

its the color that i cry

so i give you 3 blue roses

one for my love

one for my sorrow

and one just to give





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hanging_girl_666 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 6:22 am
I agree. Very good poem. And red is getting over-used in rose poems i think. I like blue :)
 
JessHaley replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 12:11 pm
Thank You.
 
Mariam.JThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 2:47 am
I love the flow of this poem and the way you've made blue a colour of love rather than the usual red ( :
 
JessHaley replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 12:11 pm
Thank You. 
 
Blackmirror said...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 10:49 pm
beautiful! i think it flows well, and i really like it. :)
 
JessHaley replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 12:12 pm
Thank You.
 
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