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dreams of an anrcho-syndicalist

Dreams of anarcho-syndicalist
Why?
Why do I work for the wealth of others
I work why do not choose how
I am a slave forced to work for money or starve
if I break they get a new one
Why?
Why do the few claim mastery over the many
I vote but those with green are in charge
I am a cog in deadly machine
i must fight to free my brothers and sisters
Why?
Do I fight war for the masters
I will not gain from its victory
The people lose all sense of self just to pleas the masters
I am anarchist for my freedom and for our freedom



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TheShadowWriter said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 6:14 am

I believe that this poem may go somewhere if you edit the grammatical errors. You need to break it down with either commas or periods to give the poem a definate rhythm you also need to check your capitilization in some areas. "Pleas" in the penultimate line should be please. I'm just wondering...shouldn't-

"Why?

Do I fight war for the masters

 

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Why,

do I fight war for the masters?

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bombthrower replied...
Aug. 26, 2011 at 6:08 pm
thx.............................
 
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