My Life

June 24, 2011
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endless rejection,
cause of my imperfection,
not good enough to pass anyone's inspection,
love and affection,
becomes lies and injections,
that turn into infections,
don't know what to do with all my bad decisions,
like head collisions,
that fog up my vision.

so I just sigh,
ignore the world not asking why,
I will look up to the sky,
breathe in its my turn to shine, want to live or die,
is a choice not a crime,
so this is now my time, this time is mine.

so feel the love till you scream,
i know its crazy as it seems,
if you pick sides you pick my team, stay awake as you dream,
I feel the pain from every week,
my stress level rises as we speak, a crack in life finally leaks,
if you don't know what its like then take a peak,
cause happiness is what i seak.

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Mariam.J said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 2:23 am

I really liked the way everything rhymed. It made it more pleasurale to read. Oh and the metaphors were great too ( :

Good imagery ^^ .

Awesome poem ( :

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Zinaidia said...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 5:41 pm
Wow. That was alot of rhyming....VERY nice job here. A few misspellings here and there, like the "seak" should be seek. But otherwise, great job!
Dkoch10 replied...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 5:57 pm
Thank u! And i know :/ I typed it on my iPod so spell check went to thst "seak" and I didn't re-read. But thank you!:)
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