One Last Breath

June 23, 2011
By Breee GOLD, Salina, Kansas
Breee GOLD, Salina, Kansas
10 articles 2 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you really love someone, you shouldnt have to work at it."
-Vanessa Hudgens

And I know I'm not perfect and I never will be.
But, I hated how much you actually loved me.
I hate how much you remind me of how many boys have broke my heart.
Saying very slowly, "Nothing can keep us apart."
Being with a boy like you, being able to only feel this once in my life... It's all so over-whelming.
Sinking deeper into water when I know I can't swim.
Breathing in my one last breath knowing my mistake.
What kind of risk I had to take.
Realizing what spell you put me under, I realize how much I'm afraid of being hurt once again.
I'm not perfect and you aren't either but I knew it wouldn't last.
and so, I think it's best; if I didn't write the rest.

The author's comments:
The past few months have been the hardest months of my life. I feel alone in a world so big.
Recently, I lost 2 best friends. One in a car accident, the other to a stupid fight.
And now, I'm losing the third...
Hope you like it.

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