One Minute In Time

June 20, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them


Mr.Moore standing tall
helping others
the overpowering sound
of talking
squeaking clarinets
the smell of lunch
lingering
in the
air
creak go the
stands
the cold touch of
metal
on my fingers as
I lift my flute
to my mouth
Whistle!
I've made my first
noise on my flute
at !:30 p.m.
O
who did that?
me, I squeak
Good job?
I changed in that one minute


The author's comments:
Noneof this is fiction, all this happened every detail ever word

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on Jul. 11 2011 at 9:04 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous

cool! i'm going into eighth as well! again i feel the urge to revert to forton cookie advice...resisting... failing...AHH! it is too much! you will prosper in eigth grade if you put your past behind you, grasshopper...not that i would know anyhing about that! :)

on Jul. 10 2011 at 1:06 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

i'm actually still at that school i'm going into eighth grade

on Jul. 10 2011 at 11:44 am
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous

i'd ask what school you went to in hopes we might know eachother, but then i would sound like a stalker as well as a fortun cookie. please don't tell me--go band!

on Jul. 9 2011 at 12:46 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

I <3 flute and this happened in my sixth grade year to

on Jul. 9 2011 at 12:22 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous

free verse poetry--very well done! i like how you incorperate dialoge as well. i remember the moment you write of from when i was in sixthgrade band. i played the oboe, so my first sounds sounded like a dog worrying one of those sueaky duck toys, but i was surrounded by flutes for most of the time so i still got to enjoy that wonderful instrument.

on Jul. 8 2011 at 7:14 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

i tries gutar not for me i want to play sax i did a little piano flute is AMAZING :P

on Jul. 8 2011 at 2:14 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'

no ... when i was like 5 my mom made me take guitar lessons but i never practiced and eventually stopped ... one of my sisters now is getting guitar lessons and resently stopped playing sacsophone, my other sister plays piano and the flute

on Jul. 8 2011 at 1:01 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

haha thanks

on Jul. 8 2011 at 12:36 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks so u play anything?

on Jul. 8 2011 at 10:48 am
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'

I really like how you set the seen so well ...  it makes me feel like i'm actually there, like i'm there about to play the flute for the first time :) nice

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on Jul. 8 2011 at 12:42 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See's a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u'll surely B successful in LIFE.
-Hazrat Ali (A.S)

I really loved and enjoyed ur poem...And i've played the flute too but with no tune at all...lol

on Jul. 7 2011 at 11:58 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

ok thanks though

on Jul. 7 2011 at 11:56 pm
Leena7395 SILVER, Spring Grove, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Be who you are because those who matter don't mind, and those who mind don't matter.

wow, that's pretty impressive!

i would love to, but i'm not so great at poetry. if a miracle happens, i'll be sure to post, haha :)


on Jul. 7 2011 at 10:39 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks and if u do try the flute i tink you'll like it it's a beautiful and beautiful sounding instrument it's not heavy and ur arms don't get tired if u get light headed by blowing easily it might not be for u good luck and thanks!!

on Jul. 7 2011 at 10:37 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

ya i know it's really small they didn't have a football team until brother started one if u have any poems would u mind posting them in my poetry contest forum

on Jul. 7 2011 at 9:38 pm
Leena7395 SILVER, Spring Grove, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Be who you are because those who matter don't mind, and those who mind don't matter.

the high school doesn't have a band!? that's crazy! good luck with that; i hope it all works out! i am a girl :)

on Jul. 7 2011 at 9:32 pm
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

I love your style with poetry! I've always wanted to play the flute, but I never got around to it. Anyway, this seems really realistic, and I can imagine every detail. I love it :)

on Jul. 7 2011 at 9:09 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

the high school i'm going to attend is super small but it doesn't have a band sooooo I'm going to try to get a band there i am a directors fav. Are you a boy or a girl?

on Jul. 7 2011 at 8:48 pm
Leena7395 SILVER, Spring Grove, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Be who you are because those who matter don't mind, and those who mind don't matter.

i'm not sure about your high school, but i go to a pretty small one, and there are still a lot more options at that level. i know my friend (who plays the alto sax) is interested in drum corps stuff, and that's a LOT of brass (i'm no expert, but i'm pretty sure there aren't any saxophones in drum corps) so she's learning how to play the mellophone (the marching french horn, pretty much) and she's using the school's. two friends of mine who play flute had to learn a secondary instrument this past year for honors' band, and one used the school's trombone in jazz band, and the other used the school's tenor (since we have five tenors total between the three of us players that WE own, and the school has two other rentals, so there were plenty of extras). you should definitely look into it for next year, since you aren't yet in high school, and get on your director's good side because that would help, too, haha. my group of buddies are all our director's favorite group, haha. :)

on Jul. 7 2011 at 8:35 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

i'm in band to except i'm going into eigth grade we don't have the instruments i want at home so we have to rent and that costs money i ask for this stuff for my b day and i get no's :(


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