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Vines
June 20, 2011
you wrap around my
mind
like a vine
your all I can
think about
now your with
someone else
that's what hurts
the most
© Devin N., Sherrills Ford, NC
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FrownMonaLisa SILVER said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 10:03 am
This is quite a good poem. Try and work on your grammar though it is a little lacking. I see some great potential in your work so keep up the good work. :)
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 4:42 am
Uh-oh.
You used your instead of you're. If you want to improve, take notes of your mistakes and make sure you don't do the same mistakes over and over again.
By the way, this is another good short poem that you made.
Keep writing... :) Even though you always have that mistake, I believe you will one day be able to get rid of it. :)
You used your instead of you're. If you want to improve, take notes of your mistakes and make sure you don't do the same mistakes over and over again.
By the way, this is another good short poem that you made.
Keep writing... :) Even though you always have that mistake, I believe you will one day be able to get rid of it. :)
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