Water

Water
Water brings a joy and peace
Yet it can also bring us death
Water is an earthly wonder
Which brings me closer to myself
As a stare in the water and see my reflection
It reminds me of the person I'm suppose to be
Water can be a lover or a hater
Which can help solve problems much later
The beauty of water is amazing
as it makes my problems go dazing.





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Subliminalpoet said...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 6:00 pm
I like the poem's start because it has a solemn and reflective tone about the natural capabalities of water. I then begin to see you  peer into yourself by introducing the word "reflection." I love the end how you say your problems go dazing as if to say they sleep. That was genius
 
BandNerd16 replied...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 7:35 pm
Thank you so much. And thanks for your input I really appreciate it
 
Edithx3 said...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 1:23 pm
LOVED IT. It was really good! :) :)
 
BandNerd16 replied...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 1:56 pm
Thank you I'm glad you lOved it :D
 
pics-with-no-paint said...
Jul. 6, 2011 at 12:02 pm

Def liked it! Very interesting :)

 

 
BandNerd16 replied...
Jul. 6, 2011 at 1:02 pm
Thank you so much i appriecate your comment and that your found it enjoyable
 
BrightBurningCampeador This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 6, 2011 at 12:27 am
I like it. I like how it's almost personification, but not quite. Could you look at my stuff? I have one peice called "The Water" (weird coincidince, huh?).
 
BandNerd16 replied...
Jul. 6, 2011 at 1:03 pm
Lol that is a coinencedence. and ill read it and rate it
 
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