secretly I'm A Monster

June 16, 2011
By SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil." - unknown author.
"All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream." - Edgar Allan Poe


No one knows that
I'm secretly a monster
I keep it locked up,
deep inside myself
if I let it out
well then your good
as dead
I'm a monster, a beast
darkness is in my heart,
darkness rules my life
I am the darkness
I howl to the full moon
at night, I stalk the people
of the cities, towns and villages
for hunger of
blood, fear and I give no mercy
no one knows I'm secretly a monster...


The author's comments:
It was based off of a novel I was tring to work on but It didn't turn out great...

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ShadowRealms said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 2:36 pm
No problem :)

on Jan. 7 2012 at 7:33 pm
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
27 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil." - unknown author.
"All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream." - Edgar Allan Poe

I really do need confidence...thanks so much again and I might even try writing it as a novel again:). Thanks so much! And I'm sorry about replying late.

ShadowRealms said...
on Jan. 1 2012 at 8:53 am
No problem! When I like something, I say so. You really need to have confidence in your work!

on Dec. 31 2011 at 9:55 pm
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
27 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil." - unknown author.
"All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream." - Edgar Allan Poe

Thanks so much! I just had the idea in my head for a very long time and I just need to write it down. Thank you so much:D

ShadowRealms said...
on Dec. 31 2011 at 6:17 pm
Don't sell yourself short, I think it turned out fine! This is very original and a good poem!


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