secretly I'm A Monster

June 16, 2011
No one knows that
I'm secretly a monster
I keep it locked up,
deep inside myself
if I let it out
well then your good
as dead
I'm a monster, a beast
darkness is in my heart,
darkness rules my life
I am the darkness
I howl to the full moon
at night, I stalk the people
of the cities, towns and villages
for hunger of
blood, fear and I give no mercy
no one knows I'm secretly a monster...

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ShadowRealms said...
Jan. 1, 2012 at 8:53 am
No problem! When I like something, I say so. You really need to have confidence in your work!
SweetPolarBearHugs replied...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 7:33 pm
I really do need confidence...thanks so much again and I might even try writing it as a novel again:). Thanks so much! And I'm sorry about replying late.
ShadowRealms said...
Dec. 31, 2011 at 6:17 pm
Don't sell yourself short, I think it turned out fine! This is very original and a good poem!
DarkenRose replied...
Dec. 31, 2011 at 9:55 pm
Thanks so much! I just had the idea in my head for a very long time and I just need to write it down. Thank you so much:D
ShadowRealms replied...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 2:36 pm
No problem :)
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