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Can't think,


Can't talk,


Can't cry,


Can't walk.


Can't do a damn thing,

Without someone saying something.


Everything I do is wrong,

Can't seem to do anything right.


So why should I stay here?

When all they see,

when they look at me

is a pitifull sight.





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TaleGate said...
Jul. 11, 2011 at 8:10 pm
No hun. When I look at you, it's like the whole room lights up. You are a beautiful talented sight. Even without contacts and glasses. That'll never change for me. I know you have a great heart. But what a heartfelt poem. :)
 
savetheplanet replied...
Aug. 10, 2011 at 9:46 pm
I totally feel like that sometimes.  And although I don't know you personally like TaleGate, through your poems I can feel your emotions.  And they are heartbreaking.
 
TaleGate replied...
Aug. 13, 2011 at 2:23 am
Yeah? Thank you savetheplanet. :3
 
TaleGate replied...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 1:00 pm
My emotions definitely are heartbreaking these days . . .
 
Sarah1311 replied...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 5:34 pm

Thanks guys. :)

Savetheplanet: thanks, I try. :)

 
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