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Your my shining star,

my bright light.

My good luck charm,

My white knight.



My thoughts and rants you listen to,

I don't think I could live without you.


Your sweet words and love

make my heart fly.

I never thought I could feel this way

towards a girl and not a guy.


Your my best friend,

My other half.


You keep me going.

You keep me intact.



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savetheplanet said...
Aug. 10, 2011 at 9:39 pm:
Wow, so I'm surprised that I'm the first to comment.  I loved this poem so much that I tagged it as a favorite.  It's sweet and simple, expressing all the feelings you have for your other half.  My favorite line is, "I never thought I could feel this way / towards a girl and not a guy."
 
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