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With eagerness burning,
She gazes beyond the stars.
Pondering the true meaning of life.
All of her belief's, depleted.
Her pure inquisition.
Is there a God?
Will He forgive me?
Will He save me from my faults?
Question's she wails, to an evening sky.
Yet, no answers are endured.
To live, striving to quench an assumed "God's" thirst.
To please him.
To be infallible.
Obviously, an unimaginable milestone.
She envisions such a life, and attains her own belief.
To one who lives such a horror...
A fall-out of faith... or even death may be a sweet release.





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GreenActressThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 1, 2011 at 9:48 pm
Wow. This is so....just wow! I don't really have words! This is very deep, really causes you to think, and is beautifully writen! I'm so impressed and inspired by your work! Keep writing! You have an amazing talent!
 
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