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My Lost Love

May 31, 2011
By K.M.S.Shear BRONZE, Cherokee, Iowa
K.M.S.Shear BRONZE, Cherokee, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"Some people think writing is a waist of their time. For me it’s a way to draw an image of myself through the painting of words."

He smiled at me,
His face was,
filled with love,
filled with happiness,
and then he hit the ground.
The sounds of my sorrow echoed in the rain,
he took his last breath like a newborn's first,
he looked one more time,
then he lay lifeless.
He saved me,
from a murderous demise,
I whispered thank you to his passing soul,
I heard I love you,
I whispered it back,
over the body of man I loved,
let the angels watch him.

The author's comments:
I wrote it for a class

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