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Her Secret

Behind closed eyes
Alone,
Darkness,
Abandoned,
I reach out my hand for someone to gab it
Praying in this endless blackness that I am not alone
But I am.
My breaths hurt,
My eyes search,
But no one is there
For me.
Tear feel like knives
Cutting down my face
And no one can hand me a tissue.
My brain is flooded
With visions of my empty funeral.
A priest didn't even show up.
And my mother talks about my absence
In a happy note.
And my lover finds new love
With out even saying goodbye.
So I lay here,
In myself for an eternity
Alone,
Cold,
Depressed.
And no one wants me.
My body now turns cold.
I am one of the damned,
Whose punishment is to walk this earth
Alone,
Hopeless,
Forgotten.




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Phresshmen said...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 10:22 am:
Love this, really expresses emotion, and relatable nice job
 
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am2496 said...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 10:20 am:
wow! this is great! keep writing
 
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ColorfulExpectations said...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 10:20 am:
Okay, this was an amazing piece! It was kind of spooky, but mostly sorrowful. I like it, and can relate. Keep up the amazing work! :D <3
 
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LivingMYLifeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 8:09 pm:
i love this. no happy ending, it captures true feelings. you're very talented laina
 
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