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I am Anne Frank, A Jewish, and smart young girl.
I hear Sorrow, children crying People dying, screams of terror.
I see Hunger.hate, love and hope.
I say things I shouldn’t, Good things as well as bad.
I cry at the hate, cry at the sorrow, cry when Mum makes me feel down.
I pretend I’m happy with a smiling Mask, I pretend there words don’t hurt, I pretend I’m perfect.

I am Anne frank, a teenager, Eager to learn young girl.
I want freedom, to feel the cool summer breeze on my neck.
I need Love, a mum, and a girlfriend to hang out with.
I hope I can leave the annex soon that the war will end soon.
I fear I will die, I wont see the end of the war, and that we cling onto hope for nothing.

I am Anne Frank, An intelligent, Talented, young girl.
I feel lonely, guilty that I shall live while others suffer, but happy while I’m with peter.
I try to be good, say kind things, and be respectful.
I wonder if peter loves me, if this war will ever end, if lies is okay.
I dream the day we leave, that peter will love me.
I believe, that all people are good, this war will end.
I am Anne frank a Jewish young smart girl.




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TrilobiteThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 4:46 pm:
This is really a great, moving piece.  Just make sure to capitalize proper nouns, places, and items, and also watch out for typos (using "." instead of "," when it isn't for artistic purposes).  Keep writing! :)
 
ArgonElement replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 9:58 am :
I really love this. Just use less adjectives, so that it will flow better.
 
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RFrocker23 said...
Jul. 4, 2011 at 11:42 pm:
I like this. I feel like you really captured who Anne Frank was. Make sure you watch your capitilization though. Peter should be capitalized.
 
Hippiealien replied...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 1:29 am :
thanks! and haha i didn't catch that! thanks,I'll have to change that =P
 
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