Beautiful Dreamers

Beautiful dreamers,
sleeping in the sunshine,
you look like faeries,
you look like lilies,
thriving in the sun,
your mind is coming undone,
let your ideas flow,
let your wonder grow.





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corallee This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 11:54 pm
Great job. I like how the poem itself is a dream!
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 12:46 pm
Thank you!
 
Alon_Freevoice said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:41 am
Very well written. Like fighting writer's block :)
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:47 am
Thanks! :D
 
hanging_girl_666 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:07 am
No one thinks about Lillies anymore. Beautfil flowers, they are. 5/5 stars :)
 
Raytheraym replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:30 am
Thanks! Yeah, I love lilies. :)
 
Anagam said...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 12:15 pm

I love it! :D Wonderful piece :) 5/5*

My fav lines: let your ideas flow,

let your wonder grow.

 
Raytheraym replied...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 2:04 pm
Thank you!
 
Anagam replied...
Jul. 4, 2011 at 9:32 am
You are very very welcome :P
 
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