June 11, 2011
By ZeldaEve GOLD, Lansing, Michigan
ZeldaEve GOLD, Lansing, Michigan
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As I cry,

I can feel your eyes,

Staring me down,

Daring me to protest.

As I run,

I can hear your footsteps,

Trailing behind me,

Begging me to forgive.

As I cross the bridge,

Between human and monster,

You shield your eyes,

Because you cannot believe this.

Your darling angel,

Has crossed the line,

She can no longer hold back,

The rage she has been holding for years.

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iHannahJ GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 11:59 am
iHannahJ GOLD, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"I veiw myself on my intentions, the world veiws me on my actions."

I like how there arent a lot of discriptive words and you are just getting emotions out.

sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 10:22 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See's a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u'll surely B successful in LIFE.
-Hazrat Ali (A.S)

Hey it's a nice poem...Very well written...


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