What if ?

June 16, 2011
By danita mcfadden BRONZE, Ny Ny, New York
danita mcfadden BRONZE, Ny Ny, New York
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what if ?.....





What if i was famous would anyone use me?










What if i was crazy would anyone judge me?










What if i was i told a big lie would anyone hate me ?










What if i was hurt would anyone be by my side?










What if i said i met a celebrity would anyone believe me ?










What if i got left back 8 times would anyone call me stupid?










What if i have something important to say would anyone listen?










What if i was in the hospital would anyone visit me?










What if everybody hated me would i have at least one person who doesn't?










What if i i died would anyone miss me?










What if all this happened in one day?










What if? what if ? just what if?


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This is my first piece that is going to be uploaded on teen ink =)

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jasso GOLD said...
on Jul. 2 2011 at 6:21 am
jasso GOLD, Damascus, Other
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Favorite Quote:
courge dose not always roar, Sometimes courge is a quiet voice at the end of the day saying : i will try again tomorrow

it is actually great for a start

i think you've got it


Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 10:29 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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This poem is awesome. It made me think of similar questions I've asked myself before. I love how you leave alot of spaces after the questions, that is what made me think LOL.

*Note: If you have any time what so ever don't hesitate to comment any of my poems. thankyou very much :)


on Jul. 1 2011 at 9:41 pm
introducingshelby GOLD, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
"People change so you can learn to let go, things go wrong so you can appreciate them when they go right, and things fall apart so better things can fall together."
-Marilyn Monroe

It was beautiful. I felt your emotion! Real powerful.. I know exactly how you feel. Maybe you could give me some feedback on my poems? "Let's Get Together," "I Am Alone," and "Original Taste,"? Much appreciated, thanks!

on Jul. 1 2011 at 9:38 pm
introducingshelby GOLD, San Diego, California
15 articles 1 photo 139 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People change so you can learn to let go, things go wrong so you can appreciate them when they go right, and things fall apart so better things can fall together."
-Marilyn Monroe

That was really good. You seem to have.. a good imagination. Or a way with words. Maybe both, but I felt your emotion in there.. I don't know how, but it was powerful. Maybe you could give me some feedback on my poems? TeenInk.com/forums?act=post&topic_id=16&thread_id=50455


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