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What if i was famous would anyone use me?










What if i was crazy would anyone judge me?










What if i was i told a big lie would anyone hate me ?










What if i was hurt would anyone be by my side?










What if i said i met a celebrity would anyone believe me ?










What if i got left back 8 times would anyone call me stupid?










What if i have something important to say would anyone listen?










What if i was in the hospital would anyone visit me?










What if everybody hated me would i have at least one person who doesn't?










What if i i died would anyone miss me?










What if all this happened in one day?










What if? what if ? just what if?





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jasmin101 said...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 6:21 am

it is actually great for a start

i think you've got it

 
Anagam said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 10:29 pm

This poem is awesome. It made me think of similar questions I've asked myself before. I love how you leave alot of spaces after the questions, that is what made me think LOL.

*Note: If you have any time what so ever don't hesitate to comment any of my poems. thankyou very much :)

 
introducingshelby said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 9:41 pm
It was beautiful. I felt your emotion! Real powerful.. I know exactly how you feel. Maybe you could give me some feedback on my poems? "Let's Get Together," "I Am Alone," and "Original Taste,"? Much appreciated, thanks!
 
introducingshelby said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 9:38 pm
That was really good. You seem to have.. a good imagination. Or a way with words. Maybe both, but I felt your emotion in there.. I don't know how, but it was powerful. Maybe you could give me some feedback on my poems? TeenInk.com/forums?act=post&topic_id=16&thread_id=50455
 
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