Craving For Your Touch

June 7, 2011
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I remember your touch

The way your arm felt around me

The way your heat kept me warm that long August night.

I remember your smile,

I remember how that one day you touched my hair,

The way it felt

So warm, so gaintal.

I remember the tears you shed

When it was to hard

For you to stand

The length for us was just to much

To bare

It was for me to

That's why I called it off

Not because of someone else
But the pain was to great

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OldYoungOne said...
Nov. 15, 2012 at 3:33 pm
I like the way you ended the poem by giving the reader (me) an unexpected reaction. I could probably use some tips from you about my work I would really appreciate it (could you rate it to?)
Zaylie-Loves-Kyle replied...
May 4, 2013 at 6:17 pm
Yes, will do that for you. Sorry it's so late of a reply but haven't really checked any of my work and stuff.
OldYoungOne replied...
May 8, 2013 at 7:44 pm
Its cool :) I do it all the time
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