Human?

June 5, 2011
By Eloisa GOLD, San Diego, California
Eloisa GOLD, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
Keep the will to live for the future is unpredictable -by me


Person you can be
So human,... is that a mask
To fool me that you emotions
when you dont?
...If so then why?
You know what i feel for you is real
Why must you play with me
like a drug?
I LOVE YOU
Why cant you understand that?
Its makes me
cry in pain
Yes, i'm human
I have feelings
I'm not trying to fool you!
You're not human
i am and ive had had it playing this game
If you are human then
confront me
tell me what you feel...
Human i am and can be
You...i'm not sure
Maybe inhuman is what you are...


The author's comments:
I wrote this when I woke up, it includes my deepest emotion from my soul. Where my true emotions are hidden. It's about my lover and I.

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Eloisa GOLD said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 7:34 pm
Eloisa GOLD, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
Keep the will to live for the future is unpredictable -by me

Thank you so much FallenAngel1. :)

on Jul. 3 2011 at 7:28 pm
FallenAngel1 SILVER, Chula Vista, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Good Night, good night! Parting is such sweet sorrow, that i shall say good night till it be morrow."-Romeo and Juliet act II scene II, William Shakespeare
"What's In a name? That which we call a rosse by any other name would smell as sweet."-Romeo

This is so GOOD. Keep it up!! This ROCKS!!! :-) :-)


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