I DON’T LOVE YOU

June 5, 2011
By izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
16 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
You all laugh because I'm different,
I laugh because you're all the same.
- Anonymous


Some days we go
Never looking back
Just as the like the wind will blow
Hopefully it will not attack.

But just as I would expect,
You come once more in my path.
Am I just a subject
In your wrath?

Arguing as usual,
Ending with the “I LOVE YOU”s
Our pretends are perpetual,
So I just agree and say my “I LOVE YOU TOO”s.

But no matter what you say
I DON’T LOVE YOU
LIKE I DID YESTERDAY,
And we both know that’s true.


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on Sep. 15 2012 at 9:10 am
Kestrel PLATINUM, Warrenton, Virginia
30 articles 11 photos 193 comments

Favorite Quote:
-There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy. (Shakespeare, Hamlet)

same here. haha, i've only read like three of your poems, but i like this one best so far. you have a lot, any you specifically want people to read? it bugs me because a lot of my poems that i submitted first are my best, so no one reads them cuz they're at the bottom. 

on Dec. 10 2011 at 5:46 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

of course Izy :)

izyfizy GOLD said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 9:29 pm
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
16 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
You all laugh because I'm different,
I laugh because you're all the same.
- Anonymous

Thank you Brooke!!!!!!!!!!!! :3

on Dec. 5 2011 at 10:05 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

i totally love this....

izyfizy GOLD said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 7:08 pm
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
16 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
You all laugh because I'm different,
I laugh because you're all the same.
- Anonymous

heh heh... Tank youuuz!!! xD

on Dec. 4 2011 at 5:17 pm
Allis-in-Wonderland PLATINUM, Cartersville, Georgia
38 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes people leave you...halfway through The Wood. Do not let it grieve you...No one leaves for good. You are not alone, for no one is alone." -Into The Woods

I really enjoyed this!

izyfizy GOLD said...
on Dec. 3 2011 at 10:39 am
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
16 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
You all laugh because I'm different,
I laugh because you're all the same.
- Anonymous

thanks!!!! :DDDD

izyfizy GOLD said...
on Dec. 3 2011 at 10:38 am
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
16 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
You all laugh because I'm different,
I laugh because you're all the same.
- Anonymous

heh heh... thanks! :D

on Dec. 2 2011 at 9:28 pm
flghosthunter BRONZE, Chiefland, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
be yourself

great work

on Dec. 1 2011 at 9:53 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

wow no matter how cliche it is the last stanza has to be my favorite part. this is a really good poem :) it kinda makes me happy :)

on Nov. 29 2011 at 8:44 pm
Resonating_Words SILVER, Dallas, Texas
5 articles 10 photos 87 comments

"I don't love you like I did yesterday"... that's awfully familiar (from a My Chemical Romance song, as well as some other places I believe.) In that regard its cliche, so I advise against it. On a related note, caps lock hurts my eyes. It's not necessary, and detracts, I believem from your words.

 

All in all its not horrid, its pretty well done. Could use some work in delving deeper and not just brushing the surface of a generic topic. But you have a great starting place to make this great.


izyfizy GOLD said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 5:55 pm
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
16 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
You all laugh because I'm different,
I laugh because you're all the same.
- Anonymous

YAYAYAYAYYYAYAYAYAY!!! :D

on Nov. 29 2011 at 5:55 pm
samwich7 SILVER, Aquebogue, New York
6 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
So when he asks, "You love me. Real or not real?" I say, "Real."
-MOCKINGJAY

Nice. Great work

 


on Nov. 29 2011 at 5:52 pm
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Afterall, a loose screw doesn't want to need, and a hammer doesn't want to be needed." -Me

"Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely." -Me

I really like this! Great job! ((:

izyfizy GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 10:35 pm
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
16 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
You all laugh because I'm different,
I laugh because you're all the same.
- Anonymous

Reaallllyy??? Thanks! :D

ChaoticBliss said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:47 pm
ChaoticBliss, Las Cruces, New Mexico
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Aww, GREAT JOB! (: I like the tone of this poem (:

izyfizy GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:32 pm
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
16 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
You all laugh because I'm different,
I laugh because you're all the same.
- Anonymous

Oh my gosh! Thanks!!!

izyfizy GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:32 pm
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
16 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
You all laugh because I'm different,
I laugh because you're all the same.
- Anonymous

Thanks!       

on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:31 pm
no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
42 articles 0 photos 94 comments

I really like this. But I cannot explain why. It's very good.

 


on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:29 pm
reyess_anai BRONZE, Corona, California
4 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every deep thinker is more afraid of being understood than misunderstood." Nietzsche

OMG!! that's exactly how i feel. He always comes back but  I can't tell him I don't love him so I don't say anything. Btw amazing poem


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