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Some days we go
Never looking back
Just as the like the wind will blow
Hopefully it will not attack.

But just as I would expect,
You come once more in my path.
Am I just a subject
In your wrath?

Arguing as usual,
Ending with the “I LOVE YOU”s
Our pretends are perpetual,
So I just agree and say my “I LOVE YOU TOO”s.

But no matter what you say
I DON’T LOVE YOU
LIKE I DID YESTERDAY,
And we both know that’s true.



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BreakingBrooke said...
Dec. 5, 2011 at 10:05 pm
i totally love this....
 
izyfizy replied...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 9:29 pm
Thank you Brooke!!!!!!!!!!!! :3
 
DrowningInTheBrooke replied...
Dec. 10, 2011 at 5:46 pm
of course Izy :)
 
AJFruitninja said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 5:17 pm
I really enjoyed this!
 
izyfizy replied...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 7:08 pm
heh heh... Tank youuuz!!! xD
 
theawsome said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 9:28 pm
great work
 
izyfizy replied...
Dec. 3, 2011 at 10:39 am
thanks!!!! :DDDD
 
BeyondTheBrooke said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 9:53 pm
wow no matter how cliche it is the last stanza has to be my favorite part. this is a really good poem :) it kinda makes me happy :)
 
izyfizy replied...
Dec. 3, 2011 at 10:38 am
heh heh... thanks! :D
 
KestrelThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 15, 2012 at 9:10 am
same here. haha, i've only read like three of your poems, but i like this one best so far. you have a lot, any you specifically want people to read? it bugs me because a lot of my poems that i submitted first are my best, so no one reads them cuz they're at the bottom. 
 
Resonating_Words said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 8:44 pm

"I don't love you like I did yesterday"... that's awfully familiar (from a My Chemical Romance song, as well as some other places I believe.) In that regard its cliche, so I advise against it. On a related note, caps lock hurts my eyes. It's not necessary, and detracts, I believem from your words.

 

All in all its not horrid, its pretty well done. Could use some work in delving deeper and not just brushing the surface of a generic topic. But you have a great starting place ... (more »)

 
ChaoticBliss said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 9:47 pm
Aww, GREAT JOB! (: I like the tone of this poem (:
 
izyfizy replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:35 pm
Reaallllyy??? Thanks! :D
 
sunshine7223 replied...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 5:52 pm
I really like this! Great job! ((:
 
samwich7 replied...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 5:55 pm

Nice. Great work

 

 
izyfizy replied...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 5:55 pm
YAYAYAYAYYYAYAYAYAY!!! :D
 
PrincessBubblegum said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 9:31 pm

I really like this. But I cannot explain why. It's very good.

 

 
izyfizy replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 9:32 pm
Oh my gosh! Thanks!!!
 
DependentMissIndependent said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 9:29 pm
OMG!! that's exactly how i feel. He always comes back but  I can't tell him I don't love him so I don't say anything. Btw amazing poem
 
izyfizy replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 9:32 pm
Thanks!       
 
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