love hurts

June 1, 2011
By gleek1234 GOLD, Burlington, Vermont
gleek1234 GOLD, Burlington, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
You did let me go you left me broken and heartless, crying out for help, with no one to answer my calls-Shilpa Pierpont-Hale ( poem) Love hurts


I thought we
Had it all
We were so young and naive
I thought I was in love with you
But I didn't know what love was
After all I'm only fourteen
And I keep on holding on
To the thought that
You would never let me go
But I was wrong
You did let me go
You left me
Broken and heartless
Crying out for help
With no one to answer my calls.


The author's comments:
this is about how someone is young and in love and gets their hopes up only to have them come crashing down.!

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gleek1234 GOLD said...
on Jun. 27 2012 at 8:49 pm
gleek1234 GOLD, Burlington, Vermont
17 articles 0 photos 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
You did let me go you left me broken and heartless, crying out for help, with no one to answer my calls-Shilpa Pierpont-Hale ( poem) Love hurts

well thanks very much1 i apreciate it

DanielM. said...
on May. 12 2012 at 9:18 am
Great job!!! Great Message!!!


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