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Farewell

June 4, 2011
By nancygee BRONZE, Forest Hills, New York
nancygee BRONZE, Forest Hills, New York
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The drowning sensation of your departure
left behind feelings of helplessness, vulnerability,
insecurity, uncertainty
My future had been painted around your existence
And here you leave me
Gasping on the surface for a sense of humanity
Maybe I’m fated to lead my life
Without guidance, without certainty
Without you

The author's comments:
When someone that you've based your life around suddenly disappears, whether it be physically or emotionally, there's a certain number of emotions associated with it.

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on Jun. 29 2011 at 1:26 pm
It's so deep, i completely can relate to this piece. I know the feeling of someone you love leaving you, and the words you used completely describe that feeling, which is really hard  to do. Keep it up :)