Reflections on Death

April 5, 2011
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A poet once said
that death is like sleep
we will all grow tired soon
and rest for eternity.

This makes me wonder
why fear death?
I like to sleep
I want to sleep.

I have grown weary
with life's foul storms
My soul has grown weak
In this body of mine

I am ready to dream
for the rest of my life
put me to sleep
I am tired.





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Anagam said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 1:35 pm

Honestly I feel this way sometimes. I feel tired and I'm like why not pause life?

And I also believe death shouldn't be feared.

Awsome job! :D

 

 
writingchick This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 11:23 am
I really like the metaphor(:
 
tyedye said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 8:30 am
Amazing :)
 
RingoStarrlover said...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 5:24 pm
This is a great poem! I feel the same way sometimes! Death is nothing to be afraid of, we can't prevent it.
 
BellelaVie said...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 1:52 am
Wow. Just wow. This peice is so beautifully simple and peaceful. It makes death feel and sound like a calm wind or something, just something that happens, like a reward for life. This is wonderful
 
Lanieloo said...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 10:25 pm
wow, this is an amazing peice. It really makes you think. Do the world a favor and keep writing!
 
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