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I am irate
With my parents

They are unaware
Of how difficult they have made
Poetry
For me

They seem to have forgotten the
number one
Tool
In a poet's arsenal

They seem to have forgotten
That hundreds of poets have
Established
Their craft purely on
Their deleterious and
Stifling childhoods

It would appear that my parents
Are not in support
Of my poetry because they
Do not provide me with
Inspiration
For my writing

They are
Too loving
Too caring
Too supportive
To have much to
Write about

Unfortunately,
I am mentally sane,
Without horrifying childhood scars,
Without deep emotional conflictions,
Without hate and anger pumping through my
Circulatory system

It is a pity
That I have been raised in
An affectionate
Warm, Vibrant, and Encouraging
Community

I will never make it as a poet,
With an exceptional childhood

I have had it
Either my parents afflict me
With these conditions,
Or I will afflict myself

Until then
I must endure
The pain and suffering

And am forced
To have subjects
Such as this
For poems

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ConstanceContraireThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 30 at 11:38 am:
Wonderful poem! Very funny :P
 
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Jennalynn said...
Apr. 8 at 11:04 pm:
I love the fun wit of this poem. And do understand I think it is great, deserving of being voted to the top. I only make comments as suggestions to help people improve their works of art, and my suggestion to you is dropping the first couple stanzas and start with: 'they are too loving too caring...' Once again, this is your beautiful writing, and I comment only to possibly help. 
 
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Moee1This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 8 at 1:33 pm:
Great poem,
 
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Josika.NavThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 8 at 1:35 am:

lol! nice one !! keep writing and great work! XD

 

 
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ImagineLotsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 28 at 2:07 pm:
You've inspired me to write a poem. Great job.
 
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ImJustAGuyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 17 at 1:09 pm:
Please check out my page !  new and upcoming writer 
 
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OneInAMillionThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 16 at 6:19 pm:
I can relate to this in so many ways. Keep writing!!!
 
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Mairee1998 said...
Mar. 16 at 8:35 am:
This is very true! This piece is very intersting...most people feel this way... ik i do!
 
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Kalen-BloodstoneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 15 at 2:25 pm:

Many a poet came from a background of great dismay and misary. I don't exactly think I can say the same for you xD A poet with a harsh life has the benifit of the doubt when it comes to describing a painful encounter, or a muerderous relationship that ended in a restraining order LOL

These are some of the things you could write of . . . if you'd known them.

You did not, and yet you still have a great poem. Congratz ;)

 
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Tonia P. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 13 at 7:20 pm:
Oh Em Gee! This is friggin' awesome! Keep it up...and one more thing, be content with the life that you have been blessed with.
 
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Masey400 said...
Mar. 10 at 7:44 pm:
This is funny. I am glad you found something to write a poem about!:)
 
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MiaUnwritenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 10 at 3:40 pm:
I can so relate to it
 
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DualOsprey said...
Mar. 9 at 5:09 pm:
I love your poem it talked to me
 
AndresVThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 9 at 11:28 pm :
thank you so much
 
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heatherbugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 6 at 5:45 pm:
This is so true, I get this from my mom all the time. Love it. Keep writing
 
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TTTeeSSThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 5 at 3:24 pm:
I loved this piece! I feel the same way about my parents.
 
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ksaurus200This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 4 at 8:11 am:
I find it rather funny how you complain about your parents loving you too much
 
AndresVThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 4 at 10:43 am :
Again, this poem is not literal and i find it kind of amazing that so many people have thought it to be literal
 
Nick-MThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 14 at 10:10 pm :
I thought it was slightly tongue-in-cheek, yeah?
 
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C.Michelle1295This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 3 at 5:14 pm:
I like this poem a lot. I happen to write a lot of the tortured soul poems but that's because they are feelings I have been connected to. So whoevers giving you crap because of this poem took what you wrote the wrong way. You have a right to feel the way you feel which is what poetry's about.
 
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TheLiberalistThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 3 at 1:59 pm:
You should write an anthology based on your ironically "horrible" loving family.
 
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ChampagneSun said...
Mar. 2 at 3:04 pm:
Oh what are we average people to do? Well, clearly dispite your lack of the typical, cliched poetically relvant problems you have still managed to write a really great poem! As a luckily/unluckly average, loved teenage poet myself this brought a smile to my face, so thanks for that and keep up the great poetry! :)
 
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hanajun said...
Mar. 2 at 1:03 pm:
That was quite entertaining. It's unusual how often poets find inspiration in their 'unfortunate' circumstances.
 
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KelliBThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 2 at 11:28 am:

I totally agree with you. I have the exact same problems. How do you write about the horrible things in life when your not horrible parents never exposed you to them. This is brilliant.

*Read mine and I'll read and comment on everyone who does this for me*

 
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Lola_BlackThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 2 at 9:48 am:
Ha! It's cute! I love how you seem to be chewing your parents out and praising them at the same time. And I love how you managed to take something that's holding you back from writing, and then use that as something to write about! If you don't mind, could you read some of my poems? Thanks :p
 
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chasluther said...
Mar. 2 at 5:40 am:
Ultimate post. I often think the same way. It has made me realized so many things. Bathroom Remodeling
 
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CyberJJJ said...
Mar. 1 at 12:34 am:
I like the juxtaposition you took for the backhanded compliments...I bet your parents loved them too!
 
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Fia-fiaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 29 at 6:36 pm:
Wow, this is just insane, quite literally. Amazing and a fantasitc view on everyting. It really makes you think about multiple things... Thank you for posting and i hope to see more of your work! :)
 
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AdiDavis said...
Feb. 27 at 3:08 am:
I absolutely love this! It brought a smile to my face, and reminded me of many of my "frustrations" with my own parents. 
 
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snoopy276 said...
Feb. 24 at 9:40 pm:
Escape-the-insanity- you said "some poets right of being in love, which is by no means a wound." I don't think it is true that love can't be a wound. If you really love someone it can still hurt- for example if you are not allowed to be together or they do not love you back. Also, I think poems that say love is perfect and fantastic and glorious are just not as interesting as poems that show the conflict. Oh and you said "right" instead of "write." Just saying.
 
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bananapanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 22 at 1:56 am:
This is really funny! It's probably a very common feeling or 'affliction' for many of us strikingly average beings, yet you made it into something unique and clever. Nice job!
 
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subliminal96This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 21 at 4:25 pm:
Haha, this was fantastic. Love the clever sarcasm. As is the case with joy, pain can come from any situation.
 
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Rachel said...
Feb. 20 at 10:38 pm:
This is a great poem - I found it to be sarcastic but it also tells a great story. Excellent writing!
 
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Anny_GraceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 20 at 8:42 pm:
Wow. I can't tell if ti is sarcastic or serious but I think that it what makes the poem so mysterious and nice to read. And I guess you really are lucky to have such great parents either way.
 
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QN123 said...
Feb. 20 at 1:10 pm:
I don't agree with the message but it is a clever poem. I like it.
 
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callie15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 20 at 12:43 pm:
This is a wonderful poem, and I totally get it. It seems that a lot of people take things too literally in writing. I to, often times have to explain my writing because no one gets it. I'm a big fan of symbolism. Right now, I'm writing a story in which a daughter is still connected to her mother by the cord. I show this to my friends, and they're all like "Eww, that's gross!" But that was not the point I was trying to get across. I was trying to show that the mother in this story is unwilling to... (more »)
 
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moosiemasThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 20 at 12:13 am:
I do not believe that the pain and suffering one endures in their life has anything to do with the experiences or dreams one may possess. Love, hate, resentment, fright, whatever it may be. It is all a poem, it is all a story, only if you make it to be.
 
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KylieKThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 19 at 4:51 pm:
This is actually quite witty. This poet is trying to make a point of saying they didn't have a terrible childhood, so they don't have many pivital moments of termoil or chaos to write about. As, in most cases, poets tend to write during climatic or aching times in their life, because an artist contributes to the emotion/subject/incedent, etc., that reaches the deepest emotional chord within them. That's where they find their most inspired work. This poet doesn't have a horific personal story, bu... (more »)
 
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escape-the-insanityThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 18 at 12:02 pm:
Sorry but I don't like this. I don't think all poets have some great wound and that's what makes them good, some poets right of being in love, which is by no means a wound. And you seem to be describing the perfect childhood, which does not exist
 
Andres V. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 18 at 5:27 pm :
you don't have to like it, its just supposed to make you think. seems to me though that a bunch of people do like it so i don't know man.
 
HazyeyesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 20 at 9:46 am :
By the way, a perfect childhood can exist! but only if you make it that way. Besides a perfect childhood is a matter of opinion, you might think you had a perfect childhood because you had cake once a month. (i never get cake once a month) ps. please read rate and comment on my work!!
 
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Kai17This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 17 at 9:12 pm:
It seems to me that this is stating a very apparent fact; most poetry seems to be of the "tortured soul" nature. This provides a welcome relief. Believe me, the tortured soul style is good, writes well and is interesting to read, but shouldn't be all that poetry is about.
 
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moosiemasThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 14 at 8:59 pm:
This is true in the sense that experiencing trauma at an early age condemns one to lifelong pain... But pain and trauma are not the only emotions one can feel. Look up Robert Frost, his poems are full of beauty, the warmth and comfort you describe your parents give you. Artistic nature isn't grown from bad experiences.
 
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Doves_and_RavensThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 14 at 7:31 pm:
This poem is sort of selfish. Would you want to grow up in horror? Do you want a bad childhood? You should be lucky with what you have, but somehow, people always seem to want more. Why is the world so selfish? Why?
 
AndresVThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 14 at 9:58 pm :
You missed the point of the poem. Its not at all supposed to be literal, which i was pretty sure I made obvious. it's supposed to actually serve the opposite of how you took it; I'm being grateful for what i have.
 
Michaela M. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 16 at 5:51 pm :
the point of the poem is the opposite of what she writes about...its like reverse psychology-and the way it is written is amazeing- limmony snicket wrote something like this for nanowrimo(.com) to help incurage us to continue writing thanks for this poem i had a smile on my face for the whole time and laughed at the end.
 
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NickyJThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 14 at 4:54 pm:
Great poem. Message is clear and pretty clever at that. I wish I could say the same about my life though XD
 
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Let-Love-InThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 14 at 3:08 pm:
i think this is so different and creative. i know some people are saying that its not fair of you to write it because you are "complaining" about having a good childhood. but i see where you are coming from, its almost humorous. i really loved it!
 
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bluewordsandpurpleheartsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 14 at 2:32 pm:
i like where you went with this poem. its fresh and different. i like it (:
 
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WynterrXThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 13 at 6:20 pm:
Wow! Very clever. It's true for me as well. I lived a happy childhood and am still extremely happy! Unfortunately, this causes all my poems to be fiction... I really like this. It makes you stand out from other poets in a really cool way!
 
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