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Swings

May 26, 2011
By 20172017 BRONZE, Columbus, Montana
20172017 BRONZE, Columbus, Montana
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Little kids on the swings,
legs pumping,
forward, back, forward, back
to see how high you can get
waiting for the perfect moment
to leap
higher, higher, higher
you feel like you can touch the sky
when you release the chains
you soar
weightless in the air
for what seems like forever
and then you land
sliding into the sand
to a gentle stop



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Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jun. 27 2011 at 3:30 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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I've tried lettin go of the chains a couple times. it feels just like you describe it. I love the feeling! Your poems descriptions make it seem really real :D 5/5 stars

on Jun. 27 2011 at 12:14 pm
Little-Irish-Girl SILVER, Muskego, Wisconsin
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that's so cute

on Jun. 27 2011 at 11:58 am
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

That was pretty good you described it perfectly.  Although I was always too scared to go that high. :/  :D

Can you please read somee of my stuff? :)