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Strewn up, strung out
Bleeding, breaking, vengeful shout
Padded walls, metal locks
Binding ties and lightening shocks
Iron bars this colorless cage
Spend my nights now in a haze
of medical scent and eyeglass tint
White lab coat's new experiment
Crazed and dazed a jigsaw mind
Gently crude and deadly kind.




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DeePiper This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 2:47 am:
Thank you so much. Sorry a reply is late, having no internet kinda blows.
 
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Determinded97 said...
Jun. 27, 2011 at 8:25 pm:
I've been reading your poetry and it's really good! I love how you can put so much emotion into such a small space. 
 
DeePiper This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 3:01 am :
Thank you! I don't know how many poor trees I go through sometimes but I'm glad they haven't been wasted:)
 
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pennname said...
Jun. 23, 2011 at 4:53 pm:

brutal poem

i entered two a couple days ago, if they get on you should check em out.. kind of similar

very good.. dont stop :)

 

 
DeePiper This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 3:03 am :
I definately will do that:) And thank you for the encouragement
 
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