sunshine and lollipops and rainbows

May 24, 2011
By Kat4ever333 GOLD, Orange, California
Kat4ever333 GOLD, Orange, California
14 articles 35 photos 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
I make dark things beautiful and beautiful things dark!
-Kerli I.L.U


Darkness falls over the room
Silence is enforced
Make a sound and then you’re out
Locked behind dreaded doors

Walls will soon cave in
Make you spin
Dizzy, and out of control
Like a story forgotten to be told

Dream like no other
Nightmares from hell
Screaming from the night you were murdered
Just to let you know you’re not alone
Remember there will always be others

Cases forgotten
Assumed they were impossible
Close to the truth
With one single move
They could set your soul free forever

Cry your tears
Leave your fears
Let it all just turn to hatred
Set your eyes on these evil faces

Place yourself in the perfect position
Watch your every move
Promise to lead them to the truth

You tell yourself one day you’ll be free
Be free from these walls
The new comer’s calls
Or the silence will go on forever

Between you and me
You’ll never be free
Permanent chains
Will remain to haunt you
To remind of the way
That you were sent to that place

Where the darkness falls over the room
And silenced is enforced
If you make a sound then your
Put behind the dreaded doors


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on Jul. 9 2011 at 8:29 pm
AndRachelLovesyou SILVER, Stone Mountain, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't underestimate the value of Doing Nothing, of just going along, listening to all the things you can't hear, and not bothering.
-Winnie The Pooh

I really liked this one, I think you expressed the idea of trapped very well and I liked the imagery.

on Jul. 2 2011 at 10:39 pm
prettylittlewriter BRONZE, Villa Park, California
2 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
These violent delights have violent ends.

Hey kat! I love your poetry! Amazing

on Jul. 1 2011 at 7:43 pm
Kat4ever333 GOLD, Orange, California
14 articles 35 photos 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
I make dark things beautiful and beautiful things dark!
-Kerli I.L.U

thank you!

on Jul. 1 2011 at 6:15 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1648 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

This is great!  You should have really capitalized the title, though.  My only criticism is that 'new comers' should be one word.  Other than that, all I have to say is: Wow!

on Jun. 23 2011 at 5:07 pm
Kat4ever333 GOLD, Orange, California
14 articles 35 photos 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
I make dark things beautiful and beautiful things dark!
-Kerli I.L.U

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