Freedom's Not Free

June 15, 2011
Freedom's not free,
and life's not lively,
if you don't know how to live it right.

Peace isn't peaceful,
when beneath all the calm,
we're screaming.

Love's not lovely,
and hungry's not starving,
if you eat everyday.

Faith isn't faithful,
when you only pray on Sunday,
and sin every other day.

Humanity's not human,
and falling's not falling,
if you know you'll land safely.





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hanging_girl_666 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:05 am
One of my favorite of yours.
 
Anagam said...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 12:20 pm
I love the last two stanzas! Amazing poem :D
 
Raytheraym replied...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 2:04 pm
Thanks! :)
 
Anagam replied...
Jul. 4, 2011 at 9:32 am
Ur welcome :)
 
cowgirl4ever said...
Jun. 24, 2011 at 3:48 pm
Lovely! Good point, and nice flow of words. The only thing was, I didn't quite understand the meaning of the 3rd verse...
 
Raytheraym replied...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 2:03 pm
Thanks! :)
 
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