May 23, 2011
By VentasticVentus BRONZE, San Marcos, California
VentasticVentus BRONZE, San Marcos, California
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The sound of her feet



off the walls of

the narrow corridor.

So young, so innocent, so clueless.

At only 15,

she ran.

Her raven black hair swiftly


behind her,

as the wind hit her being,

pushing her back.

The tile beneath her, pristine,

with no sense of impurity,

reflected her heart.

The silence

watched as she dashed,

ran from a following


The tall ceiling cascaded her

with colors,

as the sun's warmth,

pierced through the colored glass.

Her presence thought to be unknown,

as she trespassed this


familiar place.

The painful silence was broken by

her's.... and another's footsteps.

A second pair of taps

swiftly flowed through,

increasing her heartbeat,

shortening her breath.

Paranoia overcoming her senses.

The menacing presence

The dangers of being caught

her heart sunk as the



His words traveled across the hall

towards her.

"And you are?"

He drew out a weapon,

intricate, with a familiar shape,

and charged

just before


into darkness,

entering the void.

Driven off by light.

Unknowing light, as another

trotted into the tensed space.

The key to salvation

The author's comments:
It was GREATLY influenced by Kingdom Hearts: Birth by Sleep.
; u ;
I love Ventus and Vanitas!

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on Feb. 10 2015 at 3:12 pm
AvengeMyBrokenSong GOLD, WHOOP, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"It takes more strength to cry at mid-defeat."
-Susan Boyle
"The closer you get to the light, the bigger your shadow becomes."
-Kingdom Hearts

This is amazing! I love Kingdom Hearts, and you have captured it in a great way:) Read some of my things?

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