The Boy with a Big Surprise

May 23, 2011
By ChloeHenderson BRONZE, San Marcos, California
ChloeHenderson BRONZE, San Marcos, California
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Easter time! Spring is here

So is little Kylie and even bigger Riley

She is four and he five

and ready to give a big surprise

It's time to search for eggs

in the bushes are bright colored jewels

in his chest is a burning flower

ready to bloom

he adventures into the brush

mouth sealed


They found the same candy filled egg

the flashing flavorful favorite of theirs

She gives it up for him

"Here you can have it"

He gives her a hug, she giggles, then

A kiss!

She stands in awe, eyes wide like she saw a shooting star

And burst out," I got kissed!"

Their small crowd cheers and the two embrace

The author's comments:
Easter happened recently and this was also a school assignment. We had to look at a picture and write a poetic story to go along with it. The picture showed toddlers kissing.

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