Who Am I

May 23, 2011
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Today I ask my Friends,
Who am I?
A gust of wind,
or a broken smile?
A black hole,
or a closed shell?
Could I be a shinning star,
people who am I?
Could I be a blue flame,
or a tear of sadness?
Am I your friend,
or your enemy?
Could I be tamed,
or am I never to be?
A destruction just waiting to happen...
What about a hurricane,
a broken wind,
a creature of the night,
or an angel of daylight?
All I'm asking you is,
"Who am I?"

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RINIVYAS said...
Mar. 28, 2012 at 9:32 am
u r sunshine.:P :)
itss nice.!
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Mar. 29, 2012 at 8:41 am
Awe, really? Thanks RINIVYAS!:) :P
RINIVYAS replied...
Mar. 29, 2012 at 9:43 am
ur wlcm buddy!
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 7:51 am
;P Lol buddy!
JustAnotherOwl said...
Feb. 11, 2012 at 3:16 pm
This is wonderful! (: I really like the word choice!
BrokenBree said...
Feb. 8, 2012 at 8:34 pm
This is really nice. I enjoyed this piece(:
J-Poetry-R said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 3:40 pm
All i know is your good at what you do, wish this was longer so i could see how truly good you are but as is nice work
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Feb. 7, 2012 at 7:47 am
I might can see if I can make this published pieace longer..Just so you can see:) And thanks!
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Feb. 10, 2012 at 8:04 am
Hmm..well I tried to make it longer but it didnt turn out..I think it was meant to be like it is..sorry..I tried though:)
StarlitSunrise This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 20, 2012 at 10:16 am
I really enjoyed reading this. :) There is a sort of frantic honesty to it that creates a very powerful mood. Keep writing!
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Feb. 21, 2012 at 7:35 am
Wow thanks alot!:) And I sure will keep writing!
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