Who Am I

May 23, 2011
By SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!


Today I ask my Friends,
Who am I?
A gust of wind,
or a broken smile?
A black hole,
or a closed shell?
Could I be a shinning star,
people who am I?
Could I be a blue flame,
or a tear of sadness?
Am I your friend,
or your enemy?
Could I be tamed,
or am I never to be?
A destruction just waiting to happen...
What about a hurricane,
a broken wind,
a creature of the night,
or an angel of daylight?
All I'm asking you is,
"Who am I?"


The author's comments:
"written because It was some things that come to my creative intelligent mind..And I just kind of put them together to come up with this."

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on Mar. 30 2012 at 7:51 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

;P Lol buddy!

on Mar. 29 2012 at 9:43 am
RINIVYAS SILVER, Jodhpur, Other
7 articles 5 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
heaven doesnt need me
"N"
hell is afraid i might take over.......

ur wlcm buddy!

on Mar. 29 2012 at 8:41 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Awe, really? Thanks RINIVYAS!:) :P

on Mar. 28 2012 at 9:32 am
RINIVYAS SILVER, Jodhpur, Other
7 articles 5 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
heaven doesnt need me
"N"
hell is afraid i might take over.......

u r sunshine.:P :)
itss nice.!

on Feb. 21 2012 at 7:35 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Wow thanks alot!:) And I sure will keep writing!

on Feb. 20 2012 at 10:16 am
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND, Clemmons, North Carolina
56 articles 0 photos 253 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Blessed are they who see beautiful things in humble places where other people see nothing." ~Camille Pissarro

I really enjoyed reading this. :) There is a sort of frantic honesty to it that creates a very powerful mood. Keep writing!

on Feb. 11 2012 at 3:16 pm
JustAnotherOwl SILVER, Unknown, New York
6 articles 0 photos 379 comments

Favorite Quote:
"See, we don't really care who you are;
Everyone is capable of looking up and wishing on a star.
So catch it, so contagious, this day-dreamer's disease,
And hope can be your sword, slaying darkness with belief."

"Sanctuary"- Paradise Fears

This is wonderful! (: I really like the word choice!

on Feb. 10 2012 at 8:04 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Hmm..well I tried to make it longer but it didnt turn out..I think it was meant to be like it is..sorry..I tried though:)

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on Feb. 8 2012 at 8:34 pm
Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
11 articles 1 photo 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own, and you know what you know. And you are the one who'll decide where you'll go." -Dr. Seuss

This is really nice. I enjoyed this piece(:

on Feb. 7 2012 at 7:47 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

I might can see if I can make this published pieace longer..Just so you can see:) And thanks!

on Feb. 6 2012 at 3:40 pm
J-Poetry-R SILVER, Enterprise, Alabama
6 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My greatest writings are on the pages of life"
- J-Poetry-R

All i know is your good at what you do, wish this was longer so i could see how truly good you are but as is nice work


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