May 22, 2011
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Her heart is covered in scars,
But they are nothing,
Nothing at all like,
The ones that cover her arms.

She hides herself in shame,
Letting the pain pile high,
She finds herself drowning,
In all the loss and gain.

She is letting go,
Letting go of this cruel world,
Leaving nothing to find,
Surely she will be going to Hell.

No one tries to stop her,
They just stand back and watch,
Watch the princess loss her crown,
Will this be the end of it all?

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sakina said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 10:26 am

It's a great poem...

But in the last para u've written loss instead of lose...well that must be a typo...Other than it's a great piece...

llove_vampirell replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 10:33 am
Thank you for pointing that out, I hadn't noticed it before you mentioned it.
Raindrops_On_Roses said...
Jul. 16, 2011 at 4:52 pm
very moving
llove_vampirell replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 11:57 am
Thank you.
Risingsoul said...
Jun. 21, 2011 at 10:37 am

you have a good grasp on poetry, and i like your style, it sounds a bit choppy tho, u could try to let it flow a bit more. :)


llove_vampirell replied...
Jun. 22, 2011 at 11:13 am
Thank you for the feedback.
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