A Silent Night

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A plane of darkness looms over the land,
a deathly silence hangs like an icicle,
the air stands still,
if any words are spoken,
none are taken,
because they freeze,
and up above is an orb of silver,
and glitter spread out,
that silver light waxes before it wanes,
there’s more,
but nothing more to say.





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LoudDreamer said...
Mar. 4, 2012 at 2:01 pm

This is very good, It paints a picture of a rather eriee, ghostly night. I can hear the spooky silence right now. Was dark and ghostly your intention?

 

Could you check out an article or two of mine? A Fool's Walk  and The Haunted Heart, maybe?

 
JoPepper replied...
Mar. 9, 2012 at 9:40 pm
Thank you, no prob I'll read yours! :)
 
mmb77 said...
Oct. 1, 2011 at 6:40 pm
This is really cool, I like how it's sort of dark
 
JoPepper replied...
Oct. 2, 2011 at 8:50 am
Thanks for reading :))
 
Alon_Freevoice said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 6:43 pm
Hey! I like your poems (except those about your brother)!!! But I like them all the more.... :)
 
JoPepper replied...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 12:34 pm
Thank you so much (sorry) :D
 
Alon_Freevoice replied...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 9:09 pm
(Don't worry about it. I was kidding. I just don't understand it, maybe) :))
 
Anagam said...
Jun. 21, 2011 at 5:55 pm

"if any words are spoken,
none are taken,
because they freeze"

my favorite part. Very good poem! :)

 
JoPepper replied...
Jun. 22, 2011 at 11:51 am
Thank you for reading my poems!!!!!!
 
Anagam replied...
Jun. 22, 2011 at 7:07 pm
You are welcome :)
 
Anagam replied...
Jun. 22, 2011 at 7:08 pm
You are wecome :D
 
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