Heart of the Ocean

May 22, 2011
By abraggrep BRONZE, Brooksville, Florida
abraggrep BRONZE, Brooksville, Florida
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Salt dyed blue with a windswept start,
An edge of the ocean, a sea of heart.
Briny breaths and lidded eyes,
Veiled by a bursting in disguise.
Sand laced in every pore,
As I walk along the shore.
How I long for the days when summer rolls
And reaches the skies for all to behold.


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jazzy16 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 20 2011 at 4:04 pm
jazzy16 BRONZE, Germantown, Maryland
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oops, sorry for the typo!

jazzy16 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 20 2011 at 4:04 pm
jazzy16 BRONZE, Germantown, Maryland
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i really like this!!! it's got nice flow and rhyme scheme and obviuosly shows thought.  it doesn't put your message out there too directly but isn't vague either - great balance! a job well done. :)




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