just a four letter word

June 12, 2011
By bluke11 SILVER, Bellingham, Washington
bluke11 SILVER, Bellingham, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
You can be mad that the roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because the thorns have roses.

just a four letter word.
you hid your skeletons in your closet nicely.
i guess i have to give you props on that.
you never wanted an angel to see you act upon your emotions.
thought that we could let go on the right foot-but you put weight on your left foot.
you just wanted me to keep my crooked smile.
trust me, i dont need you or want you to keep the sun shining.
i never expected a bowl of cherry's.
how many more time must you prove that your not like them then walk right back into the crowd.
just promise me.
love your life.
let me grow my wings.

The author's comments:
what inspired me to write this is what my ex lover has done. how i have moved on and he hasn't. i would like some feedback on this.
i was kinda upset when i wrote this so it might not have flow. just please let me know your first thoughts. thank you

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on Aug. 2 2011 at 7:40 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.

-emanuel litvinoff

no its incredibly good for the situation; i like it


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