Feel it Alone, Always

June 12, 2011
By paninilene DIAMOND, Long Beach, California
paninilene DIAMOND, Long Beach, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Done & Over"

"Anyone can give up, it's the easiest thing in the world to do. But to hold it together when everyone else would understand if you fell apart, that's true strength."

"People should be able to say how they feel. How they really feel. Not, you know, some words that some strangers put in their mouth."


It was too much to bear.
Health and Heart.
Physical as opposed to emotional well being.
Hurt, pain.
Sad, mad.
Give me reason-
Forget it!
We won't ever be.
And I know
Its the kind of love that will never show.
Cry some tears.
Scream some screams.
Stab a scab,
And leave it be.
Let it end,
Lose your friends.
Cry on no one's shoulder.
Lost. Alone.
With no where to go.
Keep it in.
No one will know.
Closed up like a dam.
That one day will break
And the water will flow.
Lose it all.
Lost in the sea.
Waiting to drown,
As you let everything be.
Be alone,
Stay alone.
That's how it is,
And how it will always be.



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on Nov. 25 2011 at 6:38 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

5 stars i love this poem!! idky i expected a happy ending but i think thats just me. im glad thewres no happy ending to this poem but i hope that in real life you get one. :)

on Jul. 3 2011 at 11:20 am
Haley_Elizabeth GOLD, Wallingford, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"Embrace imperfection rather than hide your flaws."

Oh my gosh. I'm so sorry. Thank you for explaining and I hope things get better for you. </3

on Jul. 1 2011 at 12:50 am
paninilene DIAMOND, Long Beach, California
55 articles 3 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Done & Over"

"Anyone can give up, it's the easiest thing in the world to do. But to hold it together when everyone else would understand if you fell apart, that's true strength."

"People should be able to say how they feel. How they really feel. Not, you know, some words that some strangers put in their mouth."

I was just recently- well actually a month ago, my boyfriend broke up with me... We were together for seven months.... So this poem is about being alone. About having to keep everything in, "closed up like a dam" but then everything spills out in tears and you drown in it alone. You let it out at times and its like mood swings. Plus, I lost friends. And we will never be. </3 

yeep, thats about it.


on Jun. 30 2011 at 7:58 pm
Haley_Elizabeth GOLD, Wallingford, Vermont
12 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Embrace imperfection rather than hide your flaws."

It's probably just me, but it would be helpful if you would just explain it to me a bit. Thanks!

on Jun. 30 2011 at 7:57 pm
Haley_Elizabeth GOLD, Wallingford, Vermont
12 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Embrace imperfection rather than hide your flaws."

Wonderful! But i'm having trouble finding the meaning of it. Like, what its supposed to be talking about.


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