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It was too much to bear.
Health and Heart.
Physical as opposed to emotional well being.
Hurt, pain.
Sad, mad.
Give me reason-
Forget it!
We won't ever be.
And I know
Its the kind of love that will never show.
Cry some tears.
Scream some screams.
Stab a scab,
And leave it be.
Let it end,
Lose your friends.
Cry on no one's shoulder.
Lost. Alone.
With no where to go.
Keep it in.
No one will know.
Closed up like a dam.
That one day will break
And the water will flow.
Lose it all.
Lost in the sea.
Waiting to drown,
As you let everything be.
Be alone,
Stay alone.
That's how it is,
And how it will always be.





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LivingMYLife said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 6:38 pm
5 stars i love this poem!! idky i expected a happy ending but i think thats just me. im glad thewres no happy ending to this poem but i hope that in real life you get one. :)
 
wonderHaley said...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 7:57 pm
Wonderful! But i'm having trouble finding the meaning of it. Like, what its supposed to be talking about.
 
wonderHaley replied...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 7:58 pm
It's probably just me, but it would be helpful if you would just explain it to me a bit. Thanks!
 
leneypanini replied...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 12:50 am

I was just recently- well actually a month ago, my boyfriend broke up with me... We were together for seven months.... So this poem is about being alone. About having to keep everything in, "closed up like a dam" but then everything spills out in tears and you drown in it alone. You let it out at times and its like mood swings. Plus, I lost friends. And we will never be. </3 

yeep, thats about it.

 
wonderHaley replied...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 11:20 am
Oh my gosh. I'm so sorry. Thank you for explaining and I hope things get better for you. </3
 
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