I Remember Sometimes

May 19, 2011
I remember sometimes
We promised to love each other forever
And sometimes I was too sad to speak
I remember sometimes
I loved you
And sometimes I wanted to choke you
I remember sometimes
I ignored you because I
was mad at myself
I remember sometimes,
The way you held me close to you
Then I burst into tears
I remember sometimes
(when I run. Yes, I run)
How you told me I was beautiful,
You told me everyday,
Now I am trying to live up to
Every one else’s opinion of beautiful,
And it makes me wish I had made you stay.

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illosionist said...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 9:35 am
i really like..very well and a nice flow..just watch the 'because' to close together, ruins the flow just alittle...very meaningful yet very simple, excellent :)
NewBeginnings This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 12, 2013 at 8:24 am
Thank you very much. I'll keep that in mind
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