Memory

May 13, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them


The memories that you left behind
they'll stay close by my side
and when I walk into your room
I see the times I had with you
I can't believe your gone
such a short time we had
but I'm glad I had the chance to share it with you
the time for sleep is now
it's nothing to cry about
though we'll shed our tears
in the love for you
I can't believe your gone
your still with me
your that star at night
your that tear I shed
your that angel I love
even when your in the sky above
your memory lives on


The author's comments:
When I wrote this I was thinking about the death of someone I love.

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on Jul. 24 2011 at 10:30 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

awww thanks !! :P

on Jul. 24 2011 at 3:31 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

i love this, its so moving, and it nearly made me cry, i think this is my favourite of your poems :)

on Jul. 20 2011 at 11:10 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks !! :P

on Jul. 20 2011 at 12:55 am
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER, San Jacinto, California
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes it not about winning the race,its just being apart of it."
"Life's like an hour glass glued to a table."

once again great work

 


on Jul. 9 2011 at 12:39 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

haha i agree thanks

on Jul. 9 2011 at 12:34 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
26 articles 0 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous

the people we love are the people who hurt us the most, simply by not being their. i feel like a forten cookie.

on Jul. 7 2011 at 2:17 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

I hope so and thank you

on Jul. 7 2011 at 10:21 am
Leena7395 SILVER, Spring Grove, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be who you are because those who matter don't mind, and those who mind don't matter.

This is so sweet, I bet whoever it's for feels so loved up there.

on Jul. 6 2011 at 7:23 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

ok thanks! :P

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on Jul. 6 2011 at 9:39 am
awayra BRONZE, Bucharest, Alabama
1 article 1 photo 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"i am a woman who enjoys herself very much: sometimes i win, sometimes i loose."

it somehow recalls byron but you have a totally different style! short and simple, very sincere! keep making poetry!

on Jul. 3 2011 at 3:02 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

Yes, I saw it. Thanks, by the way...

I'm glad you're moving on... :)

on Jul. 3 2011 at 2:53 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

i would never do that i'm back to normal i know she wouldn't want me to be depressed and i'm gonna live my life like i normally would until i meet her again i'm awesome i commented on a couple of ur things

on Jul. 3 2011 at 2:51 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

He/she lives in your heart as long as you don't kill him/her inside. Hope you're getting better. :)

on Jul. 1 2011 at 9:14 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1648 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

Okay!  Thanks so much! :)

on Jul. 1 2011 at 9:13 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

ok i commented on your pictures and youor bullying but i'm gonna read the aprody when i have more time

on Jul. 1 2011 at 9:05 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

i know i always do that i write it fast when it comes to me and i type it wrong sorry and thanks it means alot

on Jul. 1 2011 at 8:56 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

it's okay it's great to hear feedback maybe look at my other metaphors and u have the right to your opinion

on Jul. 1 2011 at 4:42 pm
ChildOfThePast SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Things change. And friends leave. And life doesn’t stop for anybody."

I like the idea but the poem wasn't flowing :/ to me it was hard and just going on without having any rhythm. It was like this:

I like my cat.

Yes, he has a hat.

It's quite lovley, like that.

 

Now my cat is asleep.

Poor cat.

 

Personal opinion. Sorry.


on Jul. 1 2011 at 2:21 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1648 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

I had tears in my eyes while reading this because it's really true.  Even when our loved ones are dead, they live on in our memories. 

Once again, you mixed up 'your' and 'you're', though.  Other than that, good job!


on Jun. 28 2011 at 1:28 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

thanks sorry about that i'll take ur advice




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