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Hoping

By , Romeo, MI
She sits in a corner
Scared and alone
Hoping someone will find her
So broken and cold
But no one can help her
If they don't know what's done
She hopes someone can help her
But no one will come
So she gets up and wanders
Everything about love
But she loses the battle
Cause she's not good enough
So she erases her story
And rewrites a new one
Hoping this one is better
But falls in a rut
Again she changes her ending
And shortens the book
And it ends with a tear,
A Bullet,
And Blood.



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SilentVoice said...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 2:25 pm:
This was AMAZING!!! I love the way you flow the words together like that...just amazing
 
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bubbles.. said...
Nov. 1, 2011 at 7:35 am:
omigosh..in the middle of school..and i busted into tears! i love this your amazing!
 
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Anagam said...
Jun. 19, 2011 at 12:14 pm:
sad but gr8 poem! :D
 
Guess replied...
Oct. 30, 2011 at 5:27 pm :
thanks! check out some of my other stuff? =)
 
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