Hoping

May 16, 2011
By Anonymous

She sits in a corner
Scared and alone
Hoping someone will find her
So broken and cold
But no one can help her
If they don't know what's done
She hopes someone can help her
But no one will come
So she gets up and wanders
Everything about love
But she loses the battle
Cause she's not good enough
So she erases her story
And rewrites a new one
Hoping this one is better
But falls in a rut
Again she changes her ending
And shortens the book
And it ends with a tear,
A Bullet,
And Blood.


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on Dec. 27 2011 at 2:25 pm
SilentVoice BRONZE, Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
We are all a little weird and life's a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.
~ Unknown ~

This was AMAZING!!! I love the way you flow the words together like that...just amazing

bubbles.. said...
on Nov. 1 2011 at 7:35 am
bubbles.., Warren, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Dont forget the bad. learn from it.

omigosh..in the middle of school..and i busted into tears! i love this your amazing!

on Oct. 30 2011 at 5:27 pm
Dr.GuessWhat GOLD, Romeo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Don''t let anyone else define who YOU are. Be Original! Be Unique! Be You!
Follow me on twitter! LivyJoy144 I don't post lame things bout me day. More like fun quotes=)

thanks! check out some of my other stuff? =)

Anagam BRONZE said...
on Jun. 19 2011 at 12:14 pm
Anagam BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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sad but gr8 poem! :D




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