Breathlessly Enchanted

May 16, 2011
Big brown eyes,
Long, teasing lashes,
Laughing aloud
As I he abashes.
Does he notice
How I can’t stop grinning?
I feel like Charlie Sheen-
Forever and always winning.
Softly spoken,
Contagious laughter,
How I wish he could see
My vision of ever after.
One day he’ll know,
One day he’ll see
That the thing he’s been looking for
Is- and has always been- me.
His eyes are in my mind,
Forever implanted.
Leaving me foolishly,
Breathlessly enchanted.

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NinjaGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 1:51 am
Wow. This is wonderful! The rhyme scheme flows perfectly, and your word choice is excellent. You are a very talented writer! :)
BehindBlueEyes said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 3:59 pm
This brings up my emotions that I'm feeling and describes perfectly what I feel, right down to the eyes. Great woork
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