May 16, 2011
Her permanently tear stained cheeks
faced the blood-red carpet
as her heart cried out in misery
that rang throughout the endless halls
and trapped her mind in this madness.

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NinjaGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 1:44 am
This is a great poem. It flows very well, uses descriptive wording, and says a lot in just a few lines. You should write more. I'd definitely read them if you did. Keep up the good work! :)
beautifulmudblood replied...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 10:45 am

Oh, thank you verym very much. I really appreciate what you said. It means alot. 

I should have another poem posted soon, though I highly doubt it will be quite as... disturbed as this one is. 

In any case, I'd love very much for you to look into that one as well, and thank you again for reading my work :) 

WriteLoveOnMyArm said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 12:30 pm
Beautiful.(: It makes me think about who I am as a person, and how I see myself.
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