His Poem

May 16, 2011
By ChuggaTrain.41 GOLD, Green Valley, Illinois
ChuggaTrain.41 GOLD, Green Valley, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
The greatest thing we have to fear, is fear itself. -Franklin D. Roosevelt


You're the best thing that's came in my life.
You say I'm gonna be a great wife.
Well you're gonna be a wonderful husband too.
Baby, I wanna let you know, I'm proud of you.

You've always been by my side.
Our relationship is crazy as the oceans tide.
You're beautiful as the stars.
I wonder if we'll have to share cars?

This poem is kind of crappy,
but baby you make me so happy.
I love you with all my heart.
Promise me we'll never part.


The author's comments:
I wrote this poem for my boyfriend because I never really knew how to tell him how much I love him. What I hope people will get from this is even though you may not have ever wrote a poem before as long as it's about something you love, your accomplishment will be great.

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on Jun. 17 2011 at 10:33 am
ChuggaTrain.41 GOLD, Green Valley, Illinois
16 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
The greatest thing we have to fear, is fear itself. -Franklin D. Roosevelt

Thanks,(: I was hopin someone would like that line besides me.

on Jun. 16 2011 at 11:15 am
Eno_Bladez GOLD, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
16 articles 1 photo 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
it'll be okay, if it's not okay it's not over.

'our relationship is crazy as the ocean tides' that's my new favorite thing to say. i love your poem!! :D

on Jun. 16 2011 at 10:06 am
SuperPanda409 SILVER, State College, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
If this is love I don't wanna be loved.- Get Scared

‎We are made of love and all the beauty stemming from it. We are made of love and every fracture caused by the lack of it.- Sleeping At Last

Awww, so cute. I really like this. The rhymes are not stretched, yet not completely obvious, it gives the poem rhythm and timing. This is really, really good. 


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