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You're the best thing that's came in my life.
You say I'm gonna be a great wife.
Well you're gonna be a wonderful husband too.
Baby, I wanna let you know, I'm proud of you.

You've always been by my side.
Our relationship is crazy as the oceans tide.
You're beautiful as the stars.
I wonder if we'll have to share cars?

This poem is kind of crappy,
but baby you make me so happy.
I love you with all my heart.
Promise me we'll never part.





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ChuggaTrain.41 said...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 10:33 am
Thanks,(: I was hopin someone would like that line besides me.
 
Eno-Bladz said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 11:15 am
'our relationship is crazy as the ocean tides' that's my new favorite thing to say. i love your poem!! :D
 
SuperPanda409 said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 10:06 am
Awww, so cute. I really like this. The rhymes are not stretched, yet not completely obvious, it gives the poem rhythm and timing. This is really, really good. 
 
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