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Each footstep leaves a footprint.
I'm walking away and you're behind me.
I won't turn around this time.
Your cold breath and eyes are in my head.
The memories swirling.
Your lips forming the goodbye.
My coat is tight, in the winter cold.
Each snowflake touching the ground,
In silence then blending with the already fallen snow.
Freezing by the touch.
I turn around, against my will.
And find no one there





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maki_rain said...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 4:51 pm
I really liked the idea behind this poem. I thought the flow could have been better but altogether it was really good. Keep writing.
 
DanniTwin502 replied...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 6:48 pm
Thank you for your opinion it will really help me in the future, thanks for commenting!(:
 
Brokenorbitt said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 11:02 pm
This. 
Is.
Amazing!
(:
 
DanniTwin502 replied...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 9:53 am
Thank you so much(:
 
IamtheshyStargirl said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 8:44 pm
You're really good.
 
DanniTwin502 replied...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 9:53 am
Thank you(: I have more poetry on my page, thank you for rating!!<3
 
NattyPie said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 4:56 pm

This is lovely. You have a beautiful writing voice.

Read some of my stuff, tell me what you think? I'd love to hear from you.

 
DanniTwin502 replied...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 9:54 am
I read most of your work and you're very talented(: I have more poems on my page too, if you would like to read. :D but you're really good I'm deffinatly gonna keep watching for any new work!
 
Sherlock said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 4:37 pm
Awesome poem!
 
DanniTwin502 replied...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 9:55 am
Why, thank you(:
 
Anagam said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 11:41 am

I agree w/ Eno-Bladz. Oh n i also agree w/ ur comment!!

GREAT POEM!!

 
DanniTwin502 replied...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 9:57 am
Thank you so much!(: I try to write what I'm feeling and this one just really stuck to me because I'm sure I'm not the only one who has walked away from a relationship, or been broken up with and looked back only to regret it and wish you had kept walking. Anyway, thank you and I have more work on my page if you're interested<3
 
Anagam replied...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 10:22 am
ur very welcome :) . sure i"ll check ur othere work too.
 
Eno-Bladz said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 11:12 am
wow your writing voice is very strong... I LOVE IT!!!!!
 
DanniTwin502 replied...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 9:57 am
Thank you so much! I try to write what I feel (Look at my reply to Anagam) but thanks so much I have more work on my wall in your interested<3
 
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