friends or family

May 12, 2011
By iheartu SILVER, Nuevo, California
iheartu SILVER, Nuevo, California
6 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.
laugh ur heart out
dance in the rain
cherish the moment
ignore the pain
live, laugh, love
forgive&forget
lifes too short to be
living with regrets


friends come and go but family will always be there. but best friends close or distant will be there for eternity.you may fight but you should know it will make you stronger. but dont always count on your friends be there for them too. but family probably went through the same thing and can help you but looks are deceiving they may be older but maybe not wiser. thats why i choose non of the above. because you never know who you talk to will bethe right to talk to.



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iheartu SILVER said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 1:25 am
iheartu SILVER, Nuevo, California
6 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.
laugh ur heart out
dance in the rain
cherish the moment
ignore the pain
live, laugh, love
forgive&forget
lifes too short to be
living with regrets

thhanks glad to hear im good

on Jul. 25 2011 at 3:12 am
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER, San Jacinto, California
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes it not about winning the race,its just being apart of it."
"Life's like an hour glass glued to a table."

heys its liz you should have put it in a diffrent format take a look at some of my stuff for an example ...and poetry doesn't have sentences....and on "make you stronger, but family"is how u would write that out  overall i really lked...u are allowed to rewrite it your good :p

on Jul. 25 2011 at 3:09 am
CallMeMrs.Batman SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
5 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It takes a great deal of courage to stand up to our enemies, but a great deal more to stand up to our friends."
-Professor Dumbledore to Harry Potter
"What doesn't kill you, makes you stronger."
-Unknown

Could you look at some of my stuff and let me know how you like it. I have a letter called The Death of You is the Death of Me and I think you might like it. Thanks! :)

on Jul. 25 2011 at 3:08 am
CallMeMrs.Batman SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
5 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It takes a great deal of courage to stand up to our enemies, but a great deal more to stand up to our friends."
-Professor Dumbledore to Harry Potter
"What doesn't kill you, makes you stronger."
-Unknown

heeyyyyy this is carissa. this was good but you should have put it in the right format for a poem. Overall it was really good Im glad to see your on TeenInk I didnt know you were into writing and stuff

iheartu SILVER said...
on Jun. 15 2011 at 6:22 pm
iheartu SILVER, Nuevo, California
6 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.
laugh ur heart out
dance in the rain
cherish the moment
ignore the pain
live, laugh, love
forgive&forget
lifes too short to be
living with regrets

please leave a comment i want to know what ppl think




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